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Sam Green
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 Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:18 am Post subject: in thoughts I can dream |
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If not for what, we question
the verse lies deep in thought
we sing, we dance,
and in reflection
what written in the sand
Kind Regards
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Sam Green
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Tom
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| Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 9:13 pm Post subject: Re: in thoughts I can dream |
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Am I the only one who thinks this is jibberish nonsense? Possibly the
result of a bad trip?
"Sam Green" <ssamgree@NObiSPAMgpond.net.au> wrote in news:bBPSk.14702
$sc2.506@news-server.bigpond.net.au:
| Quote: | If not for what, we question
the verse lies deep in thought
we sing, we dance,
and in reflection
what written in the sand
Kind Regards
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Dean Calin
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| Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 6:09 pm Post subject: Re: in thoughts I can dream |
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Well, I'm not a fan of prose for music, but that's my taste. The quintrain
below seems pretty random, ungramattical and well, un-musical.
But Tom, it does no one any good to cast that kind of unsolicited,
mean-spirited editorial out there.
"Tom" <ruefulrabbit@thehole.com> wrote in message
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| Quote: | Am I the only one who thinks this is jibberish nonsense? Possibly the
result of a bad trip?
"Sam Green" <ssamgree@NObiSPAMgpond.net.au> wrote in news:bBPSk.14702
$sc2.506@news-server.bigpond.net.au:
If not for what, we question
the verse lies deep in thought
we sing, we dance,
and in reflection
what written in the sand
Kind Regards
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